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Thank you all for the comments and encouragement. This was suppose to show self doubt at work, changing the bold quoted comment in the beginning into the timid quoted comment at the end, as each line is reworked and edited in the light of self doubt. Iíd hoped the indentation and unfinished sentences would make this editing process more clear, but it doesnít seem to have helped. Maybe strike-through text would have worked better. Iíll keep at it. Thank you again. - Drew
wow, the way you make the transition from stanze to stanze is amazing, your lines are left in unfinished yet they connect with the next so well! Unbrace has such an individual style as well, so creative, loved the read !
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