"I remember falling through the ice into the water beneath and how the excruciating cold seemed to slice through me like so many shards of frozen glass...."
A flash fiction piece that I wrote when we were playing around with nursery rhymes & similar stuff at a writers group. Just a bit of fun really but any thoughts or comments appreciated.
Re-edited... I have kept the older version at the bottom in case there's something I missed in the new edit. Please read the start of the second half and tell me if it clarifies things.
Please give feedback, as this is an experimental genre I'm working with.
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