It's meant to be the prologue for a story I am considering writing. Any advice, criticism would be appreciated! Basically, I'm wondering if you think it would be worth it to continue.
This is the same piece but with a bit more added on and a few changes made. So please let me know if its any better/worse. This would be my completed first chapter if it goes how i want it to.
A story of courage, rebellion, and loyalty, Leo has everything one could want: forbidden love, cute guys, beaches, Greek mythology, and of course, a slightly- crazy main character! What could be better?
A series of stories detailing the the characters of the Fianna, a group of heroes from the master story "Harmonic Apocalypse". The story chronicles Sharnon's original life as a Tyrian swordsman and his changing view of the world. The story takes place
A series of stories detailing the the characters of the Fianna, a group of heroes from the master story "Harmonic Apocalypse". An alchemist hires Sharnon, an experienced magician and swordsman, to escort him on a search for an elusive prize.
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